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Family Medicine, Doctor from Nepal

I feel strongly that I have a lot to give to a residency program in family medicine, ready for long hours on my feet. I am high energy, focused and have extensive experience in family medicine. A medical doctor trained in my native Nepal, I have now lived in the United States—along with my wife, a n…

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Residency Vascular Neurology, Preventing Strokes

In August of 2012, I flew home to Saudi Arabia (KSA) for an annual vacation with my family to celebrate the Eid holiday. I still remember Ms. A's voice when she called me, like she was crying, asking me to help her daughter and guide the family to get proper treatment. In my short visit to her home,…

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Residency General Internal Medicine, GIM

I feel that I am an excellent candidate for your residency program in Internal Medicine primarily as a result of my accomplishments. Most comfortable with the idea of giving my all to Internal Medicine and in no hurry to develop a specialty because I see GIM as the front line of the practice and per…

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Residency in Anesthesiology, Indian Applicant

I feel strongly that I am a solid candidate and fully qualified for a residency position in your distinguished and competitive Anesthesiology Program due to the intense dedication that I have to the cause of medical education as well as practice and research. Fully devoted to lifelong education in m…

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Fellowship Pediatric Emergency, Iranian

I date my interest in practicing medicine to approximately the age of 10, when my father’s work took me to spend 3 months in a rural area in the south of Iran with little to no medical care. I am not sure why at such a tender age I became so thoroughly fascinated with sickness and death in this smal…

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Fellowship Infectious Diseases, Canada, Saudi

I am a young woman doctor from Medina, Saudi Arabia; and I currently hold the position of Senior Registrar in General Medicine at XXXX Hospital, Medina, Saudi Arabia. I have now been practicing medicine for 8 years and I am an accomplished and highly regarded physician who is recognized as a special…

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Fellowship Cardiology, Saudi Doctor

 

I am a physician from Saudi Arabia currently in my third year of a residency program at the University of XXXX, Canada. I hope very much to be selected for your distinguished fellowship program in Cardiology so as to be able to make my maximum, long term contribution to medicine in this field …

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Fellowship in Cardiology. Chief Resident

I have been practicing internal medicine in New Jersey for 2 years now and have been pleased to be selected as the Incoming Chief Resident 2013-14 for XXXX University Hospital. I have always performed at the top of my class; and in addition to winning numerous awards I have published 10 papers in th…

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Residency in Pediatrics: Chinese Applicant

I was asthmatic from the age of five and was hospitalized on a number of occasions. I observed the world and the adults in it as only a child can. I could see that some doctors and nurses did their job but no more, they cared for me and the other children but other staff also clearly cared about …

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Residency Ob/GYN, Chinese, Research

It was my first break since I entered medical school and I was on the train from Shanghai to my hometown. The train was full of people going home for the Spring Festival. I was relaxed comfortable and happy. Suddenly, I heard an announcement over the train’s speaker system. “Emergency medical servic…

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Internal Medicine Residency, Philippines

The path to my becoming a doctor has not been an easy one. I knew from a very early age that I wanted to be a physician but, in the Philippines, the costs involved are beyond the means of almost all families, and this was so in my own case. I had been a straight ‘A’ student throughout school, thanks…

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Residency in Family Medicine, Uzbekistan

I was born and raised in Uzbekistan and now reside in California. I hold an M.D. degree awarded by Tashkent Medical University in 1992 and later earned a Ph.D. awarded by the Scientific Research Institute of Pulmonology and Phthisiology, both in Uzbekistan. I am a highly experienced physician and re…

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Residency Diagnostic Radiology: Saudi Woman


I am a Saudi woman born in Canada, raised and trained in Saudi Arabia and now residing in Chicago. I hold a first class MBBS degree awarded by the King Abdul-Aziz University, Jeddah. My goal is to undertake a residency in Diagnostic Radiology, sub-specializing in Interventional Radiology, in Canad…

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Residency Emergency Medicine, Caribbean School


I am thankful for the cold, blunt realization that accompanied waking up in an emergency room that day in Colorado. This skiing accident as a college student knocked me out and left me bleeding and torn. Still immature, undecided, and without a calling in life, all this began to change in ER at XX…

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Residency Emergency Medicine, Volunteer Work


Soon to be finishing medical school, I have been preparing myself for some time for my ultimate goal, to practice medicine as an ER Physician. Beginning at the Natural Sciences Department at the University of XXXX, I was able to develop the initial tools and skills for further development in the b…

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Residency Internal Medicine, Diabetes


Despite the substantial hurdles one needs to cross in order to enter medical school in my homeland, I succeeded. From the time I was a teenager I have had an intense interest in life sciences, and was ready to commit myself to the path of medicine. With hard work and resolute dedication, I earned …

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Residency Neurology, Love for Science


Driven by an intrinsic need to provide for others, coupled with my love for science and the study of human behavior and physiology, the practice of medicine came naturally for me. My deep admiration for physicians helped me to cultivate the discipline to become a doctor myself. I look forward to g…

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Residency Position, Ophthalmologic Training


The first time I used a slit lamp I was struck by the beauty of the iris. I could not have imagined that the human eye had such an intricate and exquisite structure. The ophthalmologist who introduced me to the slit lamp invited me to shadow him in his office . I viewed a retina in the teaching he…

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Residency Ophthalmology, Research


When I began medical school, I wasn't sure which field of medicine I would be most interested in pursuing. Now that I have explored the range of possibilities through preceptorships, research, personal and clinical experiences, I have discovered that ophthalmology contains all of the elements of m…

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Medical Residency Pathology, Chinese


I was born in Northeast China's Jilin Province, the so-called Manchuria region in the past. It remains an economically underdeveloped region at present. My family was rather impoverished when I was a child. My uncle and aunt devoted great attention to my education. They could hardly make their end…

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