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Sample 1st Paragraph for Residency Position in Family Medicine

I am a physician in Iran who is extremely devoted to the cause of women’s health. I am so fully aware of the fact that in my country, Iran, we have so much to learn. We look to the West to help us. This is why I humbly ask for the privilege of serving as a Family Physician with your distinguished institution. It is my hope that after serving as a resident for several years, I will be able to learn the most valuable of tools, and the wisdom that I will need when I return to Iran to do everything for the cause of women’s health in my own country. As the Middle East is once again turning into a ball of fire, we are going to need many physicians with exceptional training to help save the lives of families caught up in our conflicts. I am not optimistic about Middle East politics. And I look forward to helping.

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Since my son Davy was born on November 5, 2011, this toddler has become the total center of my world. He is all that I have, my only family. This is why I get especially excited by the opportunity to draft a model personal statement in the area of Family Medicine, because of the importance of family to us all, our futures, the future of the human race, our planet, etc.: it all depends on our children who in turn depend on their families. While I live back in Bolivia where Davy’s mother is a professor who teaches sustainable architecture, we went back to my home in the USA to have our baby. There was not a kinder more attentive medical team in the world than those who cared for the three of us. My wife had an extremely difficult delivery and we were in the hospital for almost one week. Helping residents to prepare successful statements in the area of Family Medicine helps me to stay engaged with this exciting area, and to give something back in exchange for the wonderful treatment we were given, to say thank you one more time for my gift, Davy.

When I am not drafting statements for doctors, I am usually playing with Davy and his friends, indigenous children where we live in Bolivia. Most of my own research work is devoted to the well being of children in the Developing World, children like the indigenous playmates of Davy. This is also why I especially enjoy working on behalf of family physicians from the Developing World, because I know that it is likely that they will return at some point in time and to help us, caring for the most vulnerable families in the world.

My mother, who is now suffering from Alzheimers was the main reason why we went back to the United States to have our baby. Our family physician is the kindest woman in the world, Becky Allmon in Bedford, Indiana will have my undying gratitude for eternity. Helping residents to prepare successful statements in the area of Family Medicine helps me to stay engaged with this most exciting area, and to give something back in exchange for the wonderful treatment we were given, to say thank you one more time for my gift, Davy Dylan Edinger.

Statements of Excellence for Residency & Fellowship Positions on Behalf of Applicants in Family Medicine

Sample 1st Paragraph for a Residency Position in Family Medicine, Cape Verdean

I hope to begin a residency position in Family Medicine in the State of Massachusetts, USA. Originally from Cape Verde, I completed medical school in Cuba. I am fully fluent in English, Spanish and Portuguese and have basic ability in French – in addition to being a native speaker of Cape Verdean Creole. I look forward to receiving the finest medical education and experience in the world as a resident in Family Medicine in Massachusetts. My central, long term, professional goal is to put my linguistic - alongside my medical - skills to work on behalf of the advancement of Family Medicine in the Developing World, not only in the Caribbean but also in Africa, and Latin America, particularly with regard to those countries in which I am fully fluent in the language.

I have invested well over a decade in researching what makes the personal statement for medical residency or fellowship as effective as possible - particularly in the area of Family Medicine. I invite you to fill out my Online Interview Form and send me your CV and/or rough draft for a free evaluation: drrobertedinger@gmail.com

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