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Sample 1st Paragraph for a Residency in Internal Medicine, Ethiopian Woman Doctor

Still only 25 years, I am a young woman from Ethiopia who is an accomplished physician. I like to think that I have very much to contribute as a new resident to a demanding program on the cutting edge of medicine, and I am pleased that this is reflected in my USMLE scores. I love the way that medicine is increasingly global and that everything that I learn in your program will someday help not only those who suffer in America, but in Africa as well.

I have invested well over a decade in researching what makes the personal statement for medical residency or fellowship as effective as possible - particularly in the area of Internal Medicine. I invite you to fill out my Online Interview Form and send me your CV and/or rough draft for a free evaluation. drrobertedinger@gmail.com

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Sample 1st Paragraph for Fellowship in Pulmonary/Critical Care

A doctor of humble origins in my native Yemen, I was able to leave and become an internationally trained doctor, first in Egypt where I finished medical school and later in Qatar where I have completed a 4 year residency position in internal medicine and I am now completing a fellowship in pulmonary medicine. I have also spent 2 years in the USA and I am a highly competent communicator in English. My long term goal is to someday return to my native Yemen, where I feel that I am needed most as a physician. Completing your distinguished fellowship program in Pulmonary/Critical Care will be the crowning achievement of my life so far and will prepare me to make my ultimate contribution to medicine for the long term in one of the world’s poorest and unstable countries.

General Internal Medicine physician at Mayo Clinic

Sample 1st Paragraph Internal Medicine Residency, Saudi Woman

I am a woman doctor from Saudi Arabia who hopes to be accepted to your distinguished Residency Program in Internal Medicine because I am a very hard working doctor who has now acquired significant experience that will help me to excel.  Since May of this year I have had to profound privilege of participating in a Medical Research Fellowship Program at XXXX University in XXXX, XX, serving as a clinical observer for 12 hours each week, shadowing physicians and contributing to discussions concerning numerous aspects of patient care.

Insights on being a foreign medical grad.

All of the Statement samples on this web site were written more than 2 years ago and all are anonymous.

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Sample 1st Paragraph for a Fellowship in Pulmonary Critical Care.

Shortly after completing my degree and an internship in General Medicine in my native India in 2003, I moved to the UK to broaden my medical education and practice in the Developed World in order to learn as much as I could about the resources and challenges that present themselves in the cutting-edge practice of medicine. It was in the UK, working as a staff physician in several different hospitals that I began to gravitate towards what I intend to make my lifetime specialization in Medicine: Respiratory and Pulmonary Critical Care. Since I came to America to further my experience in 2010, I spent 3 years at the XXXX Medical Center in XXXX, Illinois serving as a Staff Hospitalist and for the past 2 years I have had the great privilege of teaching Medicine at the Medical College in XXXX where I serve as an Academic Hospitalist and an Assistant Professor of Clinical Medicine.

Northwestern Medicine Residency Coordinator